i like what you're doing with the production on this one, really tight and you've clearly got a good vision for that aspect. i also really like your lyrics, you're clearly also driven by what your write about. I'd take these two elements and work on your vocal delivery. i think if you nut out what your sound is and expand on that then you could have real potential! keep at it - G

this is genuinely just such a gorgeous track. I agree with Dave that the music you're making is very humble but incredible sparkly and special, it feels like a really loving and warm hug. i may need to start a new playlists of songs to listen to in bed while its raining and you're eating stone fruit, just to give this gem a home. big year ahead for you guys i think! - G